小学一年级英语作文:My dog

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；丰富的使用了长难句；文章用词太过单一，且单词拼写错误较多。

Dudu is my dog.dudu nine years old today,Its birthday present is a big one.dudu is so happy,It is barking.We are very happy,It was a happy day.dudu is white, like rolling on the floor, body fat is very cute.my classmates like Dudu,one touch it, hold it for a while，I like Dudu.