小学一年级英语作文:My dog

单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅。

Dudu is our family dog. Today is his ninth birthday. It's birthday gift is a big head, toot very happy, it is barking call. We are very happy, it's hair is white, rolling on the floor like a ball, Adorable. My classmates also like toot, like the white hair, I am very happy, because I like doodle.