小学一年级英语作文:My dog

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩。

Dudu is our family dog. Today is his ninth birthday.It's a birthday gift is a big bone, Dudu happily cried, We are very happy, it's hair is white, rolling on the ground like a ball,adorable. My classmates also like toot, like the white hair, I am very happy, because I like doodle.