小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；简单句偏多了。

I have a good friend. she is a beautiful girl. she has a long black hair, two big brown eyes and a red mouth. her voice is big. she is singing very much. She is a like clever girl. She likes reading books , playing computer games and chess. she is also nice. she often helps us . our classmates like her very much.