正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;衔接成分偏少。
My new teacher is science teacher. He’s very strong. He has a big mouth, two big ears, two big eyes and a not too big and not too small nose. He often wears a new black shirt and a brown pants, with two big shoes. My science teacher is very kind. And he is very smart, isn’t he? Today, we have a science class. We are very happy why he is funny. Who is he? He’s a Mr. Zhou.