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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13037
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分60.5分
评语:

衔接词和过渡词用的很不错;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更棒;请注意积累词汇量,拼写错误比较多。

用户练习作文:

There is a littlie story that happen in a restaurant. A guest wants to have a breakfast in the restaurant and he wants to try chinese style breakfast. But the chef cannot speak english, also the guest cannot speak chinese so that he cannot tell the chef about his preference. At last, the guest only has his breakfast as usually. In my oponion, the story tell us how importantly communicate with each other. The chef cannot fluently know of the guest needs, finally cannot give satisfied service to the guest. And the guest cannot speak chinese so that he cannot know more about our country and oure chinese culture.

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