2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

请作者在词汇丰富度，尤其是在学术词汇的积累上再接再厉；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。

As we all know that,"Rome is not built in one day."Consequently,the way to success is not easy way for us,we should prepare something to make it.It's significantly motion that we must do a lot of thing to success. If we want do well in one yield,the most importantly thing is that we should keep interesting in one thing that we truly want do.Secondly,we should collect a great many of information and obtain useful relationship.The last but not the least,we should keep good attitude to face various challenges in the way to success. Personally,if we can do that ,the hand of success will be come.We should aknowledge that it's essional things to success.Only in this way can we have a wonderful and colorful future.