文中过渡词和衔接词使用较少;单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩。
My home is very big, there is a big living room, a big sofa, there are a few bedroom and a few toilet. There are 5 people in it. My father in the living room reading a newspaper, my mother was cooking in the kitchen, grandpa on the sofa, drinking tea, grandma also on the sofa watching TV, I in the large room with my homework. Oh! Yes, there is one, that is in the garden to play doodle! My cute little dog!