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语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；复杂句使用不错，句法规范；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了。
If my foreign friend comes to my hometown,I will take him to visit around some beautiful places.As I study in Yichang where there are many fascinating travelling place like The Three Gorges Big Waterfall and The Three Gorges Dam ,I will introduce the latter site to him.Firstly,The Three Gorges Dam is the one of the most famous dam in the world,which would attract him very much.what's more,the site is good enough to have a look because of its grand view.In addition,The Three Gorges Dam is our symbol,and we are proud of it. So if I take him to visit the dam,not only can he have a great impression on the place,but also he can introduce the place to his country according to his feel.
