希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是高级词汇的积累;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章上下文衔接自然。
Friendship is one of the best things a person can enjoy. It’s very difficult to find a better word to describe friendship. A true friend shares pleasure in our joy and sorrow in our sadness. In times of danger, he or she is always at our side to give us his or her help.Friendship is very important to everyone. We should be very careful in our choice of friends. A friend should be confident, like to do good things, and like to help others. If a person won’t try to help when you are in trouble.