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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36983
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
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希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是高级词汇的积累;文章组织结构良好;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩。

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Friendship is one of the best things a person can enjoy. It’s very difficult to find a better word to describe friendship. A true friend shares pleasure in our joy and sorrow in our sadness. In times of danger, he or she is always at our side to give us his or her help.Friendship is very important to everyone. We should be very careful in our choice of friends. A friend should be confident, like to do good things, and like to help others. If a person won’t try to help when you are in trouble, you should reconsider if that person is a real friend of you.

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