小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

作者词汇量积累很好，高级词汇积累要重视；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

I have a good friend named Wang Minsheng. He is a great person. He always helps me a lot when I get in trouble. He does everything he can do to give me the support. At one time, I got sick because the weather change. He heard of this from another friend of ours. He hang up the phone and came to visit me imediately. He stay at my side of bed nearly two days. He didn't fall asleep at night until I feel much better. I don't know how to thank him, for what he has done to me. I am really touched. So, when I heard that he was going to move his family to another city because his wife found a new job, I almost burst into tears. I went to the airport with my family to say goodbye and wish he and his family will have a better new life in a totally different new world.