2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；丰富的使用了长难句；文章用词太过单一，且单词拼写错误较多。

I am a collge studengt,i m from Yun Nan China.i thingk it is a beautiful place, i love here,and i will take my foreign friend going to the Kun Ming,because it is a beautiful city.and i like the weather,it's so nice,i belive that my foreign friend love it very much.