小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

作者词汇量积累很好，高级词汇积累要重视；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

I have a good friend named Wang Minsheng. He is a great person and he always helps me a lot when I get in trouble. He does everything he can do to give me the support. At one time, I got sick because of the weather change. When he heard of this from another friend of ours, he hung up the phone and came to visit me immediately. He stayed at my side of bed nearly two days. He didn't fall asleep at night until I feel much better. I don't know how to thank him, for what he has done to me. I am really touched. So, when I heard that he was going to move his family to another city because his wife found a new job, I almost burst into tears. I went to the airport with my family to say goodbye and wish he and his family will have a better life in a totally different new world.