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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:诚实

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:25浏览次数:3383
要求:

题目要求:

围绕诚实写一篇小作文。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分69.5分
评语:

简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;作者词汇表达比较多样,也能较好的使用一些高级词汇;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

There is no onc can deny the importance of honesty in our life. Honesty will help us to achieve our objectives more rapidly. If we facts our family with honesty, we would trust each other. Father and mother will give the children more room to do themselves' thing. Even if the children go outside to have fun with his classmates or friends, the parents also trust the children because of their honesty. If we deal our work and colleague with more honesty, we can win the trust and cooperation from them. We honesty facts the fault of our work in order to compete the mission and achieve the profits. If we take more honesty with our lover, we can trust each other and be faithful to the love. We could feel the wonderful and amazing of the love beacuse of honesty. Above aff, I would like to appeal all to fact everything with hoensty. Because honesty is the lubricant of success and happiness.

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