2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦141:敬老院慰问老人

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We met at the school and rode there together.We got there at nine and did something for the old people.We swept the floor washed the clothes and cleaned the windows.Then we had lunch with old people.After lunch, they told stories about them to us.It's interesting.And it made us respected them.We went home at four and we felt tired,but no one hated it,because it's fun.So why don't you go there and take care of the old people?