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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:诚实

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:25浏览次数:3383
要求:

题目要求:

围绕诚实写一篇小作文。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分69.5分
评语:

作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;作者词汇表达比较多样,也能较好的使用一些高级词汇。

用户练习作文:

There is no one can deny the importance of honesty in our life. Honesty will help us to achieve our objectives more rapidly. If we fact our family with honesty, we would trust in each other. Father and mother will give the children more room to do themselves' thing. Even if the children go outside to have fun with his classmates or friends, the parents also trust the children because of their honesty. If we deal with our work and colleague with more honesty, we can win the trust and cooperation from them. We honestily fact the fault of our work in order to compete for the mission and achieve the profits. If we take more honesty with our lover, we can trust each other and be faithful to the love. We could feel the wonderful and amazing of the love because of honesty. Above aff, I would like to appeal all to fact everything with hoensty. Honesty is the lubricant of success and happiness.

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