2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色；请作者增加词汇丰富度，加强拼写检查。

in a big data time,informations go to us throught a variety ways,but almost these news may be a pieace of part,which will make man to draw a conclusion that is not overall. obviously, it's not reasonable . there is a saying from ancient Chinese,think twice before you do,which is vital for us whether we are still learning or got a job already.