语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;熟练使用了一些长难句;请作者增加词汇丰富度,加强拼写检查。
In a big data time,information go to us throught various ways,but almost these news may be a pieace of part,which will make man to draw a conclusion that is not overall. Obviously,it's not reasonable . There is a saying from the ancient Chinese,think twice before you do,which is vital for us whether we are still learning or got a job already.
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