2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；文章词汇使用丰富度还要提高，高级词汇的积累上也要再接再厉。

In the age of big data ,information goes to us throught various ways,but almost these message may be a piece of part,which will make man draw a conclusion that is not overall. Obviously,it's not reasonable.There is a saying from the ancient Chinese,think twice before you do,which is vital for us whether we are still learning or got a job already.