语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活;可适当增加几条从句。
In the age of big data ,information goes to us through various ways,but almost these message may be part of business,which will make man draw a conclusion that is not overall. Obviously,it's not reasonable.There is a saying from the ancient Chinese,think twice before you do,which is vital for us whether we are still learning or got a job already.
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