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牛津英语八年级第四单元测试考试作文及范文

发布时间:2013-06-07 17:05浏览次数:4556[网页划词已开启]
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周末你去北京野生动物园参观。请根据你所观所感,写一篇短文。
要点:
1.  有很多游客,他们给猴子喂食,和老虎玩耍。
2.  动物和人很友好,我们应该善待动物。
3.  保护环境非常重要,动物园内不要随地扔垃圾。
4.  知道了野生动物保护的重要性。因为保护动物就是保护我们自己。
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从句使用量太少;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;文中词汇表达较熟练丰富度不够,但请检查文章的单词拼写。

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Last weekend,I went to a safari park.I saw many differert kinds of animals there.I just could't blieve my eyes when I saw what in the safari park.Tigers,monkeys,lions,koalas and giraffes were living in their own "houes".How lively it is!Many visitors were played and visited in it.Everyone played in happyness.Such as:some of the visitors were feeding the monkeys.some were playing with tigers.They were friendly to each other.Not only the people bat also these animals.So we should more care for the animals.They are so kindness.But how can we protect the animals?One great thing is protect the enveronment from destruction.Don't throw the rubbish anywhere is very important.To make a long story shout:protecting animals is protecting ourself!

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