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牛津英语八年级第四单元测试考试作文及范文

发布时间:2013-06-07 17:05浏览次数:4555
要求:
周末你去北京野生动物园参观。请根据你所观所感,写一篇短文。
要点:
1.  有很多游客,他们给猴子喂食,和老虎玩耍。
2.  动物和人很友好,我们应该善待动物。
3.  保护环境非常重要,动物园内不要随地扔垃圾。
4.  知道了野生动物保护的重要性。因为保护动物就是保护我们自己。
用户的作文(系统评分45.5分
评语:

加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;高级词汇偏少,且文中有部分拼写错误;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

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Last weekend,I went to a safari park.I saw many different kinds of animals there.I just could't blieve my eyes .Tigers,monkeys,lions,koalas and giraffes were living in their own "house".How lively it is!Many guests were played and visited in it.Everyone played in happyness.Such as:some of the visitors were feeding the monkeys.some were playing with tigers.They were friendly to each other.Not only the persons bat also these animals.So we should more care for the animals.They are so clover.But how can we protect the animals?One great thing is protecting the enveronment from destruction.Don't throw the rubbish anywhere is very important.To make a long story shout:protecting animals is protecting ourself!

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