小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；丰富的使用了长难句；文章词汇表达比较灵活，高级词汇的使用要继续加强。

i have many friends,but the most especial one named Mia, we are classmates in the high school, we are share everything. her homework is better than me, and friends more than me, i'm so happy for her.but, something changed in 2013,i introduce one boy-friend to her,then they are get together.until now, i haven't received any news from them,i heard they are married this year, i'm so upset.i don't want to say how i feel,actually, i did like that boy long long ago,that's terrible story. i hope i can meet some guy better than him,good luck.