文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强。
I have many friends,but the especial one named Mia, We were classmates in middle school, we shared everything. Her homework is better than me, and friends more than me, I'm so happy for her.But, something changed in 2013,I introduce one boy-friend to her,then they get together.until now, I haven't received any news from them,i heard they are married this year, I'm so upset.i don't want to say how i feel,actually, I did like that boy long long ago,that's an terrible story. I hope i can meet some guy better than him,good luck.