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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
【高频词句】
1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
简单句比重过高，另应加强复杂句的练习；文中词汇表达用的较灵活，同时能够较恰当地使用高级词汇；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰。
We’ve shipped out 150639/150640/150641/150642/150643 for Antique House。Good morning! We would like to let you know our progress and business development. We have moved to new factory. BTW have you reviewed the two samples? Any comments to share with us? Moreover, you have priority to access our new designs. Colorful stools are newly designed. Very fashionable! And we pay much attention to weaving details and customer experience when we design them. It will be very comfortable to sit on them. Attached fyr. Any interest in particular ones, pls kindly share with us. Thank you!
