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字数：300 满分：100分
采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；若注意部分错误，文章会更漂亮。
With development of the social,more and more students are careful with their money in daily life,as student,most of time,our money come from our parents.So,we should learned how to manage our money.In the process,i think that all this make us smart consumers. At present,we collect all kinds of coupons is orded to save money,when we must make money to live,we have realized how to manage our money which can help us solve some problems in life.And if we are learned these way in advance,we can save some money too. SO,it is very important for us to become a smart consumer.
