2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(47):给某英文报社写一封信

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Dear Editor, I'm a senior high school student．Now many students use mobile phones.The reasons are as follows.On the one hand,a mobile phone in hand shows fashion,which can make them happy.On the other hand,it is easy to get touch with family and friends. However,as the older saying goes,every coin has two sides.Mobile phone has no exception.FOr example,there are some persons who take mobile phone into the classroom,which deeply affect the leaning.What's worst,some students don't realize that they were wasting time to sent text messages in class. As far as i'm concerened,I firmly object this action.We are high school students ,not a child.We should take our responsibility rather than wasting it.As a result,it is necessary to ban mobile phone in schools.