托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第49篇:坚持不懈是否能让人变得更加强壮

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ues,i agree with that perserverance make people strong. keeping something on continuously is,in some extent,a form of performance being strong.for example,when you experience a hardship whice make you depressive,self-obased,and self-suspected,you will find it good feeling to go through it .then you will be prond of youself for your perserverance.when you get used not to give up,in the other word,it is strong.in fact,i experienced the same,i keep moving and gain best feeling.and this inspire me every time when i confront difficult thing.