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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):信息爆炸

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:09浏览次数:5742
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay about the impact of the information explosion by referring to the saying "A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention. You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
用户的作文(系统评分48.0分
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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,高级词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查。

用户练习作文:

Are you bothered by 'information explosion'?In modern world, we get used to look up information that we need,in other hand,we usually lose for too much irrelevant informatoin.we are distracted by various words,images ect coming from email messege,website ad.confused with endless of this,we are in want of direction to find that we need.we can enter proper website and find it with keywords.don't be distracted by other information with instesting keywords,if you have not enogh time.

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