小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句使用不够丰富，且部分句子有错误；文中用词稍显贫乏，文中存在一些拼写错误。

my best friend my best friend is tim who is my classmate .he is kind man .he alway help other people when they in trouble.we offen paly bastketball on weekend ,but i alway last the game. jim is goog at playing the ball. so his dream is become a professer player.