小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；文章用词太过单一，且单词拼写错误较多；适当丰富句式。

my best friend is tim ,a boy who is my classmate .He is a kind man .He alway helps other people when they are in trouble.We ofen paly basketball on weekend ,but i alway last the game. jim is good at playing the ball. so his dream is became a professional player.