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Dear Editor, I'm a senior high school student. Now many students use mobile phones. They think it's a fashion to use mobile phones. Besides, it's very convenient to get in touch with their families and friends by using mobile phones. But now some students bring their mobile phones to the classroom. We are often disturbed by the ring of mobile phones when having classes. What's worse, some of them even waste precious time sending text messages in class. In my opinion, a classroom is a place for us students to gain knowledge. We are supposed to focus on our studies. Meanwhile, students should be forbidden to use mobile phones in the classroom. Your sincerely, Li Hua
