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2009年专八英语作文真题:方言在公众场合使用

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:21浏览次数:10545
要求:
题目 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
说明 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:300满分:100分
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如若适当增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩;作者高级词汇使用比较准确,不过文中词汇表达贫乏;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。

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A study on differences between Chinese and western ghost culture is chosen as the title of this thesis. Firstly, it makes a general introduction about ghost. Secondly, it presents a brief explanation to the the legend of Chinese and western ghost. Thirdly, it analysis the differences of Chinese and western ghost culture, including the ghost in the spirits of Chinese traditional culture and western culture contrast and the differences between Chinese and western ghost culture from the perspective of ghost festival. Then, it discusses the reason for the differences between Chinese and western ghost culture. Finally, it concludes the function of ghost culture in the intercultural communication. This paper mainly discusses the differences between Chinese and western ghost culture. Its purpose is to let reader a more understanding of ghost culture and Chinese and western cultural differences.

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