初中英语命题作文真题演练(89):生活离不开水

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；丰富的使用了长难句；文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，但单词拼写做的很棒。

i am crazy about the sea .u know the deep deep blue sea ,which are all too impressive to be forgotten .and i think it is the way the water is always everybody,s dream.our life can not do without water and the number of the water is reducing and we have a problem about water pollution and we advocate the water reuse