初中英语命题作文真题演练(91):音乐节目

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l like the progrm very much especially the english songs because i can learn lots of from the marvelous program.i especially like to listen the music program .i think these kinds of hing are the essential parts of our culture .when i am busy or tired i always turn on the radio to listen to the show.i think these kinds og things are the essential parts of culture /well ,i think my favourite has to be music prit ogram .u know ,it has a gorgeous past,and there are many precious yhings left from differrent historical periods.learning it by watch ing the program seems to be he best choice.