语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;丰富的使用了长难句;作者词汇表达比较多样,也能较好的使用一些高级词汇。
what is meaning of life?how can we make life meaningful?we offen think about these question.then,confused about life,we keep seeking for dream,and fight for it. the Philanthropist believe that offering help to other is beneficial to find who they are;dreamers are pleased to do everything for what they want;realist persuit a mere goal that live more comfortable and economic .thereof if you really want your life no regret,do your best to come true your dream,get your family and friends to love,make attempt to help others.