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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):有意义的生活

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:13浏览次数:9043
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make your life more meaningful. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
用户的作文(系统评分59.5分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;丰富的使用了长难句;作者词汇表达比较多样,也能较好的使用一些高级词汇。

用户练习作文:

what is meaning of life?how can we make life meaningful?we offen think about these question.then,confused about life,we keep seeking for dream,and fight for it. the Philanthropist believe that offering help to other is beneficial to find who they are;dreamers are pleased to do everything for what they want;realist persuit a mere goal that live more comfortable and economic .thereof if you really want your life no regret,do your best to come true your dream,get your family and friends to love,make attempt to help others.

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