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in resent years,a increasing number of students have been neglecting to studing chinese. this tyle phenomenom reflct that some young people tend to be realistic.the main cause is the foreign culture pour into china and more and more people are ready to work in foreign enterprise after grauation.it will lead to less understanding in chiese traditional culture for chinese.