文章衔接手法恰当;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句。
China is now more and more involved in international events, so it is necessary for us to improve the qualities of the citizens as manners play an important role in international communication. Sometimes some people don't behave properly in our daily lives. For example, rubbish plastic bags are thrown in public places can be seen somewhere on the ground in the street. In public gardens , flowers are picked or trees are lettered. How worse are they . In my opinion, these bad behaviors will make bad impressions upon visitors to China, which will have a good reputation of China as a large country with a long history. So all people should be taught to be well-behaved and every one of us should form good habits from now on.