文章衔接手法恰当;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但高级词汇稍显不足。
Now,China is more involved in international events, so it is necessary for us to improve the qualities of the citizens as manners play an important role in international communication. Sometimes some people don't behave properly in our daily lives. For example, rubbish plastic bags are thrown in public places can be seen somewhere on the ground in the street. In public gardens,flowers are picked or trees are lettered. Their behavior is worse. In my opinion, these bad behaviors will make bad impressions upon visitors to China, which will have a good reputation of China as a large country with a long history. So all people should be taught to be well-behaved and every one of us should form good habits from now on.