2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；句式灵活多变，再加强从句的使用会更棒；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，单词拼写要认真；请注意分段。

As far as we know,the serval time from computer was invented to the present,a wide rang of making use of computer in the workplace,in addition to its fast calculation and convenience operation,computer has spread into people’s daily life.Then, people became aware of the side effects of excessive use of the computer.