新东方托福高分作文:你更想在大公司还是小公司工作?

文章结构严谨，有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细。

some peple like to working in a large company but somebody prefer to stay at small company, these depends on the different personality and job category. People who choose to work for a large company may have a more aggressive character . The large company usually have more oppotunity and pressure as well, if somebody want to have a promotion , he or she would better work in the large company. On the other hand, small companies have their won good , the people in small company may have less perssure ,and it's more easy to get along with the colleague if someone working in small company. Also small company might become a large compeny in the future ,such the facebook, which only has few people in it ,but gradually it becomes a huge company and won a big succusse. In my opinon , I prefer to work in a small company .Because small company have less employees and everyone in the office are very familiar with each other. We can work together just like a family! Moreover, I believe that small company have more potential to grow ,and I can be the fist one to see and join it's grows.