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i always go to school on foot every day.it can help me to increase my sense of direction and teach us life truth science and philosophy .they can help to increase our knowledge which is souce of strength.i can see many cars and buses in the street at a crossing to wait for a blind man.at last ,he said goodbye to him.it is a good thing that we can build our charactern and form a correct outline on life