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nevertheless,under no circumstance can we brush aside the function of hosting the Olympic Games should not only belong to the host country and economic level general country to host the Olumpic Games. FOr example,some developing country hosting the olympic Games which not only let the other countries understand the history and future development of the nation. Also,the Olympic Games host country play a vital role in spreading their own knowledge. moreover,it can also provide a long term benefit for countries to host the game.