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文章结构清晰，有效地采用了多种衔接方法；作者高级词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；可适当增加从句的使用。
nevertheless,under no circumstance can we give too little care to the function of hosting the Olympics should not only belong to the host country and economic level general country to host the Olympics.. FOr example,some developing country hosting the olympic Games which not only let the other countries understand the history and future development of the nation. Also,the Olympic Games host country play a vital role in spreading their own knowledge and a showcase for technological innovation. Moreover,it can also giving each of the hosting country enough time to modernize with repairs,security technologies and additions. provide a long term benefit for countries to host the game.
