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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦138:盲人

发布时间:2015-05-29 14:01浏览次数:395
要求:
跟据所给图示和词语写一篇小短文。(词数50 左右)
1. go to school on foot, every day
2. many cars and buses, in the street
3. at a crossing( 在十字路口), waiting for a blind man(盲人)
4. say goodbye to him
用户的作文(系统评分81.0分
评语:

有效地采用了多种衔接方法,层次清晰;文中词汇表达较准确,高级词汇表达灵活;作者在句法层面做的很棒。

用户练习作文:

nevertheless,under no circumstance can we give too little care to the function of hosting the Olympics should not only belong to the host country and economic level general country to host the Olympics.. FOr example,some developing country hosting the Olympics which not only let the other countries understand the history and the future development of the nation. Also,the Olympic Games host country plays a vital role in spreading their own knowledge and a showcase for technological innovation. Moreover,it can also to give each of the hosting country enough time to modernize with repairs,security technologies and additions.

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