有效地采用了多种衔接方法,层次清晰;文中词汇表达较准确,高级词汇表达灵活;作者在句法层面做的很棒。
nevertheless,under no circumstance can we give too little care to the function of hosting the Olympics should not only belong to the host country and economic level general country to host the Olympics.. FOr example,some developing country hosting the Olympics which not only let the other countries understand the history and the future development of the nation. Also,the Olympic Games host country plays a vital role in spreading their own knowledge and a showcase for technological innovation. Moreover,it can also to give each of the hosting country enough time to modernize with repairs,security technologies and additions.