2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦138:盲人

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Despite all the above benefits,we should not ignore that there are many disadvantages that don,t encourages to hold the Olympics at just one city in the whole world. first of all,this will prevent all kinds of countries in the world the rights of the hosting the Olympics. Also.hosting the Olympics will suffer serious pollution if the internation visitors came to the same sites. moreover,local people complain about the pouring of foreigners who lead to traffic disturbance