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过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；文中应增加从句和复合句的使用。
Despite all the above benefits,we should not ignore that there are many disadvantages that don,t encourages to hold the Olympics at just one city in the whole world. First of all,this will prevent a great variety of countries in the world the rights of the hosting the Olympics. Also.hosting the Olympics will suffer serious pollution if the foreign visitors came to the same sites. Moreover,local people complain about the pouring of foreigners who lead to traffic disturbance
