新东方托福高分作文:你更想在大公司还是小公司工作?

文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩；作者词汇表达比较多样，也能较好的使用一些学术词汇。

some people like to working in a large company,but somebody prefer to stay at small company, these depends on the different personality and job category.People who choose to work for a large company may have a more aggressive character. The large company usually have more opportunity and pressure as well, if somebody want to have a promotion , he or she had better work in the large company. On the other hand, small companies have their advantage.Employees in small company may have fewer perssure ,and it's more easy to get along with the colleagues. Also small company might become a large compeny in the future,such the facebook, which only has few people in it ,but gradually it becomes a huge company and won a big succusse. In my opinion , I prefer to work in a small company .Because small company have less employees and everyone in the office is very familiar with each other. We can work together just like a family! Moreover, I believe that small company have more potential to grow ,and I can be the founding menber to see and join it's grows.