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In conclusion,both sides are reasonable，nonetheless they are one-sided.In my opinion,hosting the Olympics at a permanent home has plenty of advantages and disadvantages.In my opinion,the host Olympicss beyond all discusion ,but we should make sure that let the every country has the rights of hosting the olympics.in conclusion,both sides are reasonable.But they are one-sided.In my opinion,hosting the Olympics at a permanent home has a great deal of advantages and disadvantages.In my opnion,the host Olympicss beyond all discusion ,but we should make sure that let the every country has the rights of hosting the olympics.
